Bare heather chapter 1

heather walked along the path to snowclan.soon clan cats stopped her."Who are you and why are you here?"they asked."I am heather,this is my daughter Moon,I am darkfur's daughter.She explained."we don't belive you!"they said and she swore the apprentice stuck his tounge.she ran to the nearest out of territory suitible den.

darkfur's point of veiw:

he had become deputy.when the patrol came back and reported the tresspasser,he knew it was his daughter.he and sparkfire (he ovivuoisly deosn't know about the name change.) had often discussed what they'd name their kits and haether was one of her favorites.so soon he began running about looking for his daughter.then he heard crying and smelled heather."heather?"he aked."Dad?"she replyed."he stepped in the den."what's wrong?"he asked."I-I-I just found out m-m-mom d-d-d-d-d-ied."she sobbed